Monday, August 20, 2012

Trifecta: Week Thirty-Nine

Samuel R. Delaney says, “Endings to be useful must be inconclusive.”  What do you think?  Do you prefer a tidy, clean finish to a book or do you like a little bit left unsaid?

Here's what we like: Writing In The Margins, Bursting At The Seams and her exciting wrap-up, Apricot.  The chipping away of nail polish and the number of the train helped create the setting and build us up for wondering why Isodora prefers blood red.
As she waited for the nine-seventeen train, watching lingering farewells and ecstatic reunions, Isodora smiled to herself and picked away her apricot nail polish. It’d been his favorite color. She preferred blood red.
Second place this weekend goes to Misener Miscelany for his haunting denouement, This is the end, beautiful friend, the end...  Here, it ends with a hiss not a bang.

Third place goes to Jester Queen for her real-life ending to her already-published book, Divorce, A Love Story.  Pretty impressive stuff.

Congratulations to our winners and thank you, again, to everyone who helps us out with comments.  Incidentally, if you too have a book published somewhere, feel free to leave a link in the comments section of this post so we can all check it out.

On to this week's prompt.  For inspiration this week, we took to our Meet Your Fellow Trifectans meme, where two Trifectans (Marie Nicole and R.L.W.) suggested the same one-word prompt.  If you haven't already, please consider clicking over and completing the questionnaire yourself.

Your prompt this week is the third definition of:

HEART (noun)

1: a hollow muscular organ of vertebrate animals that by its rhythmic contraction acts as a force pump maintaining the circulation of the blood
2: a playing card marked with a stylized figure of a red heart
3: personality, disposition <a cold heart>

Please remember:
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response.
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above. 
  • Only one entry per writer.
Good luck!

14 comments:

  1. Congrats to all the winners! I'm so looking forward to this week's word.

    I published Parallel Jump, a middle-grade fantasy/sci-fi-lite novella earlier this year. (I'd share the last line, but it's a little bit of a spoiler ;)

    http://amzn.to/OQEBpO

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  2. Hooray for the winners! I really enjoyed this one, as it gave me a bit of a head start for NaNoWriMo 2012. :P

    I published "Catrina in Space"; it's a sci-fi random meta-humor novella, which I wrote for last year's NaNo. The last line's "And so, for almost everyone in the story except perhaps Murphy the Terrible, they all lived happily ever after." Which is a bit spoiler-y, I guess, but Murphy's one of the story's villains, so it just wouldn't do to let him live happily ever after.

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  3. Oh, er, here's the link. Sorry about that.
    http://www.amazon.com/dp/1470194058

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  4. Oh, wow! Thanks. I wrote this one after looking up the last line of my novel and discovering I hated it. I'm glad this one worked.

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  5. Congrats to the great entries!

    p.s. HEART... I suggested that word too! How wonderful that great minds do think alike.

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    1. Sigh. No, Marie Nicole, you were the one I meant. I'm so sorry for the mixup. I've edited the post to correct my carelessness. Thank you. And thank you for a great prompt idea!

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  6. Thanks for the shoutout and congrats to all! Kelly, I want to know about that apricot, too! I should add that Parallel jump is really good - Cam is one hell of a writer. I haven't read Catrina in space!

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  7. I just posted; must go to my OTHER therapy - my actual therapist! But will be back to read all later. Look out, Jester, I'm comin' your way. GREAT prompt, and thanks for the inspiration. "Heart" you all (!), Amy

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  8. Hi Lisa and Joules - idiot self here linked back to the trifecta homepage in her genius linkup. Can you delete my first linkup? I linked again and marked the real one .Gracias!

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    1. But it was so good for business. :-) Done. And don't call yourself an idiot.

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  9. Going to miss this week! Just got back from dropping daughter off for first year of college. See you for the weekend!

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  10. I checked my link to Trifects and there two video links which I did not include as part of my post. If you click on them, they don't take you anywhere so I have not idea what this is. But I have no idea how to get get rid of them either. So, please scroll down until I can figure this out!

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    1. Ok, I think I got rid of them. If anyone has any idea as to how that happened, I'd love to know.

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  11. http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2012/08/24/stoicism/

    Late, as usual.

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