Nice work, Trifectans, adding to the 33 words that were given to you. First place this weekend goes to former Trifecta editor, David at Puffery & Taradiddle for his piece, Anti-Climax. Pillow talk does nothing for the ladies at the helm of Trifecta. Literary references, however, make us swoon.
Rounding out the top three is Edward Hotspur whose beautiful descriptions about knocked us off our feet.
Our three winning pieces this weekend could not be more different from one another, which is just one of the things we love about you guys. Congratulations to the winners, and thanks to everyone who linked up and left comments for one another.
Thank you also to those who left feedback on last week's critique. We have another piece up for critique this week, and in an effort to encourage your participation, we're sweetening the deal with a giveaway. One of my absolute favorite authors is Marilynne Robinson. Her writing is stunning. I get lost for days in a single paragraph of hers. This week, each person who leaves a comment on our current critique will be entered to win a copy of Marilynne Robinson's book Home. If you tweet out a link inviting others to leave feedback for our critique, you can earn a second chance at winning. (Be sure to mention @Trifectawriting and use our hashtag #Trifecta so that we see it.) If you submit a piece of your own writing for critique, you can earn a third chance, for a total of three possible chances. (Past and current submitters are automatically entered.) The winner will be drawn by random just before our next Trifecta post goes up next Monday.
On to this week's prompt, which is again inspired by the upcoming dark holiday. This time, though, we're giving you a lot more room for interpretation. Please remember to use the third definition, which, in this case, is fairly specific.
BLACK
“On the count of three!” she cried.
I’ll be honest, it surprised me. I’m no Lothario, but I’ve had my share of pillow talk. Being ‘counted in’, though, was certainly a first.
And it quite spoiled the moment.Coming in second was Whimsygizmo for her piece, On the count of three…(Ro.Sham.Bo.) Read it out loud for maximum enjoyment. It's pretty incredible what she's done here.
Rounding out the top three is Edward Hotspur whose beautiful descriptions about knocked us off our feet.
Our three winning pieces this weekend could not be more different from one another, which is just one of the things we love about you guys. Congratulations to the winners, and thanks to everyone who linked up and left comments for one another.
Thank you also to those who left feedback on last week's critique. We have another piece up for critique this week, and in an effort to encourage your participation, we're sweetening the deal with a giveaway. One of my absolute favorite authors is Marilynne Robinson. Her writing is stunning. I get lost for days in a single paragraph of hers. This week, each person who leaves a comment on our current critique will be entered to win a copy of Marilynne Robinson's book Home. If you tweet out a link inviting others to leave feedback for our critique, you can earn a second chance at winning. (Be sure to mention @Trifectawriting and use our hashtag #Trifecta so that we see it.) If you submit a piece of your own writing for critique, you can earn a third chance, for a total of three possible chances. (Past and current submitters are automatically entered.) The winner will be drawn by random just before our next Trifecta post goes up next Monday.
On to this week's prompt, which is again inspired by the upcoming dark holiday. This time, though, we're giving you a lot more room for interpretation. Please remember to use the third definition, which, in this case, is fairly specific.
BLACK
1a : of the color black
b (1) : very dark in color <his face was black with rage>
b (1) : very dark in color <his face was black with rage>
(2): having a very deep or low register <a bass with a blackvoice>
(3) : heavy, serious <the play was a black intrigue>
2a : having dark skin, hair, and eyes : swarthy
b (1) often capitalized : of or relating to any of various population groups having dark pigmentation of the skin
2a : having dark skin, hair, and eyes : swarthy
b (1) often capitalized : of or relating to any of various population groups having dark pigmentation of the skin
(2) : of or relating to the African-American people or their culture
(3) : typical or representative of the most readily perceived characteristics of black culture
3: dressed in black
And, in case you need some inspiration, we'll borrow a bit from the past with Pearl Jam's Black. Click to undo the last twenty years. Discussion for the comments section: Where were you twenty years ago? Did you listen to Pearl Jam? If not, what were you listening to?
I was thirteen. I ordered the album from Columbia House. (Remember that?) This song was something of an anthem.
Pearl Jam- Black from Sonny on Vimeo.
3: dressed in black
And, in case you need some inspiration, we'll borrow a bit from the past with Pearl Jam's Black. Click to undo the last twenty years. Discussion for the comments section: Where were you twenty years ago? Did you listen to Pearl Jam? If not, what were you listening to?
I was thirteen. I ordered the album from Columbia House. (Remember that?) This song was something of an anthem.
Pearl Jam- Black from Sonny on Vimeo.
Please remember:
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
What an incredible song. I also ordered from Columbia House.
ReplyDeleteClick to erase the past 20 years. I'm SO in on that. Thanks. ;)
"Black" should inspire some really good writing.
I was on a bus, going to Canada with my HS band. My buddy sitting next to me let me listen to his portable CD of this album. Senior year of HS. Good times.
ReplyDeleteI was close to five years old, probably listening to Barney's "I Love You". *shudder*
ReplyDeleteSome of my favorites won this week!!!! ^__^ This past Trifextra had some great entries. A lot of them had me cracking up or reading in awe. Sometimes both :D
I was in high school (senior year). I had "Ten" on cassette - wore it out. Like most others, I associated that song with the 'unreachable' crush; whatshernamenow?!
ReplyDeleteTwenty years ago, I was one going on two. I like to think that I listened to my parents occasionally, but I don't think that's true.
ReplyDeleteOh, you kookie kids! I was in the 4th year of my 24 year teaching career. Loved the "Seattle Sound" that was exploding at the time; Nirvana, Pearl Jam, Soundgarden, Alice in Chains, Screaming Trees, etc. Although not a classic, was influenced by the Cameron Crowe movie, "Singles", in which Pearl Jam had small roles. Enjoy "Black" this week, everyone.
ReplyDeleteI was a teenager, living on my own. Bouncing from house to house. I loved this music and scene. It made me feel alive. Ha!
ReplyDeleteOh dear. OK.
ReplyDeleteSince you asked.
I was fifteen.
My sister was ten.
We were still two years before her first suicide attempt.
But she was already sneaking out at weird hours and damaging property in inexplicable ways.
She loved Pearl Jam.
I never could stand them.
Shit. I'm sorry, Jester Queen. xx
DeleteNah - don't be. I don't blame Eddie Vedder or even Jeremy or Daughter. She actually introduced me to some good music too. She just tried so hard, even at ten, to emulate Pearl Jam. I think the songs identified with her, rather than the other way around.
DeleteAlso, your ad choices are match making for Christian Singles. Hmmm...
ReplyDeleteNo. YOUR ad choices are for Christian singles. Mine are for 5-star resorts in Asia. #betterhere
DeleteMine are for Kayak.com because it's #betterthere
DeleteThere are ads? #betterwithadblock :)
DeleteAdblock. I shall look into adblock. And I'm jealous of all the people who don't get geographically spammed with Christian shit. Happily, today, it's something forgettable that looks GPS related.
DeleteIt's an extension for the Chrome browser, though I think Firefox has something similar. Not sure about IE or Safari. But it eliminates ads from almost anything.
DeleteCool! I'm chrome
DeleteThe ads are our attempt to at least partially cover the costs associated with running the site. Obviously, it's cool if you want to block them, but can I please ask that you not encourage the whole community to do so? Trifecta isn't free to run, sadly. Thanks!
DeleteYikes, sorry - this is what I mean. I didn't actually realize you were talking about ads *here* because I don't see them. I wouldn't have said anything if I'd paid more attention.
DeleteNo worries! Ads are not our favorite friend, either. But the reality is that we're only spending money over here, not making it. Coming out even would be ideal. :-)
DeleteOh Good lord, and the whole thread is my fault because I was bitching about what ad choices likes to throw my way. All apologies.
Delete20 years ago I was sitting the HSC here in NSW Australia. Last week I attended my high school reunion, and no one had changed much really.
ReplyDeleteNever took to Pearl Jam. Bon Jovi was more my style back then. And standard, boring Rock from the 80s.
After high school, I went to community college for a year before enrolling in a 4-year college far from home. I delivered pizza, listening to the "alternative" station and hearing Jane's Addiction, Red Hot Chili Peppers, and of course, Pearl Jam, especially "Alive" over and over again. It opened up a whole new world to a kid who was all about '80's heavy metal. I even learned to like Depeche Mode eventually.
ReplyDeleteJust want to say thanks for stopping by my blog. Glad you like the story. I really enjoy being part of this challenge.
ReplyDeleteTwenty years ago... My senior year of high school, and a fabulous one, at least in retrospect. I was deliriously in love with a boy who loved someone else, and it made for wonderful angst and terrible poetry. I had a tight knot of close friends, of which this boy was the ringleader. We've since drifted apart, but in a way, that lets me remember those friendships as they were: perfect and unchanging. Pearl Jam was part of the soundtrack, and Nirvana too, but we were U2 junkies all the way. I still prefer to listen to Joshua Tree lying on the floor in the dark.
ReplyDelete20-some years ago, I promised myself that Eddie Vedder will be my next husband. Heh.
ReplyDeletejuuust got it in. Whew!
ReplyDelete20 years ago, LOL, Eddie Vedder was a nascent rock icon.
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