Monday, February 4, 2013

Trifecta: Week Sixty-Three

Welcome back, Trifectans!  It was certainly fun reading through your dialogue this weekend.  It's interesting that such an open-ended prompt produced a lot of similar situations--cheating, betrayal and murder, namely.  You Trifectans are a sinister group, and we like you just as you are.

Coming in first place this weekend is Mike Jackson who gave us It's a Shame.  We chose Mike's piece for first place because it accomplished what even we thought was impossible.  It told a rather complete story, introduced us to a strong character, and created a nice twist all in thirty-three measly words.  With some revenge on the side just for good measure.
“Jim, it’s me, Maureen, I’m going to switch off your life support machine. Can you hear me?” 
“He’s beyond that Mrs. Smith. He can’t hear or feel a thing.” 
“That’s a bloody shame.”
Second place goes to Trailer Trash Deluxe who gave us the hilarious Christian Mingle.  We thought the dialogue was not only funny but very real, too.

And third place this week goes to Whispatory for Goth.  This piece left us shivery.  You?

Great job to all of our Trifectans.  Thank you for taking the time to link up with us.  Before we move on to our one-word prompt, we'd like to encourage everyone to revisit our instructions page.  If you're new, there may be things there that you don't know.  If you're a more seasoned Trifectan, there may be things there that you've forgotten.  Thanks!

This week's word is:

PATH
1: a trodden way
2: a track specially constructed for a particular use
3a : course, route
  b : a way of life, conduct, or thought

Please remember:
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response.
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above. 
  • Only one entry per writer.
  • Trifecta is open to everyone.  Please join us.

This week's challenge is community-judged.
  • For the 12 hours following the close of the challenge, voting will be enabled on links.  
  • In order to vote, return to this post where stars will appear next to each link.  To vote, simply click the star that corresponds with your favorite post.
  • You can vote for your top three favorite posts.
  • Voting is open to everyone. Encourage your friends to vote for you, if you wish, but please don't tell them to vote on a number.  The numbering of the posts changes regularly, as authors have the ability to delete their own links at any time.
  • You have 12 hours to vote.  It's not much time, so be diligent! We'll send out reminders on Twitter and Facebook.

43 comments:

  1. The dialogue this past weekend was oh-so-fun :D And it's good to know I'm in good murderous company xD Awesome job to everyone, winners and all!

    Path, huh? Hmmm....

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  2. My hats off to Mike! Incredible dialog... a true gem!

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  3. Lots of fun dialoguing this week. Congrats to those recognized.

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  4. I am unfortunately still having issues submitting. My link keeps breaking again and I know not why.

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    1. This is the exact correct link that you should enter, this is the one that worked for me when I clicked it. Try again! :)

      And thank you so much for your lovely comments at my site. I really appreciate it.

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    2. http://ramblingsfromamum.wordpress.com/2013/02/05/trifecta-challenge/

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    3. Thank you again fro trying to help me Sciptorwrites.

      Error: The requested URL returned error: 404

      I put in your link, which is the one I tried several times last night, but this error message keeps appearing. Maybe my MAC has issues with this Link In Software? I do appreciate your attempts at helping me, but I think I will have to give up on trying to enter the challenges :-( as for my comments on your writing, it was powerful and you are so welcome. :-)

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    4. Hi there,

      I linked you up. I admit--I took Scriptor's link and pasted it into the field, and it worked with no problem. I'm not sure why it didn't work for you. Definitely not a Mac issue, since that's what the editors and many of the community use. Is all of your software up to date??

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    5. Sometimes if there's a leading space before the "http://" when you paste the link, it *looks* right, but doesn't take you anywhere. Just a thought. (Because that happened to me once.)

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  5. There are some awsome writers, I wish I could comment on all of them, but Blogging is the only social media I use and I can't post comments on some stories?

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    1. I have similiar problems in that I can't post to some of the stories that are really great, and that I'd like to post comments to.

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    2. Some blogs do require that you sign up to a third party, like Disqus, in order to comment. If this isn't something you're interested in doing, you can either not comment or else leave your comment here for the writer to see. Trifecta does not have a mandatory commenting system in place, but we love that you're giving feedback. Thanks!!

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    3. I just started using the Disqus system and I think a person can still leave a comment without opening a Disqus account. The downside to that is that the commenter won't receive the blogger's reply via e-mail.

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    4. I tried to comment on your story, but I could not manage it. Just wanted to tell you I loved it.

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  6. I just want to apologize to everyone. I've been making the time to read most of the entries, comment when I can or feel inspired to. Not so this week, I'm afraid. It's my first week back to "work" so to say, and it's been a bit of an upheaval. I'll try to catch up.

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    1. No worries! Trifecta is supposed to be, first and foremost, fun. Do what you can when you can. Hope your week goes smoothly.

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  7. i'll be back tonight to visit ~ looking forward to some great reading!

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  8. Trifecta and Trudgingthroughfog and Tom and Scriptorwrites I thank you all for your support. I want this to be fun and I want to participate, I hope with the next challenge that it will run smoothly for me. I am not sure how it was able to be linked, but Trifecta did it and I am grateful. I love this site, for like most writers I have moments of being 'brain numb' and this encourages me to challenge myself. I thank everyone who has shown support and given guidance.

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  9. Thank you so much, Lisa and Joules. I am honored to be a "medalist" here. I'm sure I'm not the only writer who sometimes feels like their stuff is good, only to get a huge round of "shoulder shrugs" from readers, but this one got a lot of likes. I'm usually too lazy to write, but this one was a lot of fun! Thanks again.

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  10. Hi! Newbie here! This is my first time trying this challenge! *Waves*

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  11. Hello there friends & comrades -in- pen/mouse?:-)Have been having a lot of guests & no time to peep in-finally today I am free:-)

    It was great reading all the weekend entries & hearty congrats to the winners:-)

    I was happy that I could submit a reasonably fair "dialogue" which was well received by my fellow Trifectans-thank you to all who encourage & support me through their comments.

    Am off now to find my "path" & reveal it to you all.This time its community judged-oh,oh,67 posts already-when will I read them all?(Rushing off hurriedly,mumbling)...

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  12. I just wanted to pop in and apologize; I think I accidentally submitted the link to the wrong story, one way back from 2011. I do not know how this happened. Very odd. At any rate, I deleted the link and resubmitted and hopefully it works now. Also, it's amazing how many posts there are in this prompt. So many stories! :)

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  13. Vote for me or the Princes get it.

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    1. Sorry, guess it's the pillow for the princes...

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  14. I was going to vote for myself 3 times, but I see I can't... that's pretty unfair. Guess I'd better go save the Princes...

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    1. Yay! This is a big deal...with the Princes saved, you may change the course of English history!

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  15. What's a guy have to write in order to win one of these things?

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    1. Ha ha! Well, given that there are (typically) only three winners and 81 links (this time around), "winning" is not so easy. The goal is to have fun and improve your writing in the process. But if you are looking for specific concrit, tell us in your intro. Trifectans have been known to give excellent advice.

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    2. Seems to me that only women win this challenge. Seems kind of sexist.

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    3. Interesting. Two thoughts. One: most of our writers are women. It stands to reason women will win more challenges, since more women participate in each challenge. Second: this challenge (and every third) was judged by the community. You guys chose the winners, not us.

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    4. Also, of the past five challenges, three first place winners were female, two were male. Pretty darn even, I'd say. Actually, it's slanted towards the men, given that more women linked up.

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